Not bad.

Very good! Good music!

The melody is good! Well done! There are of course a couple of flaws: 1) At the beginning (at 11-12 seconds) a chord comes in too sharply, you need a little softer. 2) You have music without increasing the "volume", that is, the drop is not felt, it feels like a drop is not a drop (I hope you understand me, although you have a good place there). In principle, everything. Good luck! (Google Translate)